Update on This Doesn't Feel Like the Future
I finished the third draft of part two a few days ago.
It is, by far, the most polished section so far. Part one will need a rewrite, though not an extensive one. Part three is only two drafts in and will mostly be gutted, based on what I've read over the last day or so.
It's gutting for a good reason, though. The characters have evolved significantly in the rest of the book, and part three has to keep up with them.
I'm at the point where I could use a few readers for the first two sections (about 135 pages combined). It's not in final form, but it's far more polished now. It's a book missing it's third part, essentially. It would be very helpful to know if it flows and is easily readable, along with anything that feels off or missing.
Let me know if you're interested. I appreciate it, as always.
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